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So...
There once was this boy
And he met a girl
They went to the movies
And they held hands
They went out for dinner
And they laughed by candlelight
They walked along the beach
And they felt a shiver

Then the boy woke up
And was blurry at first
The layed back down
And now he's trying
To get back to sleep
And get back to you

The boy took the pills
And eyes fell fast
He shivered again
And arrived home at last

Please come sweet dream
And bring back her scent
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i like that, its simple but effective, nice job :)

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Life is like a ball of wool, it starts fine is messy in the middle and ends up fine again
I love your writing, it sends shivers up my spine!

I like how its simple at first, a guy and a girl go out, they go on a typical date. But then it's a dream.
Makes me want to go to sleep and dream.

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Do you believe in fairytales? I do
Love it <333333333333

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Let's set the stage on fire.
Hollywood will be jealous, bby ...
Thanks. =]]

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Meow.
Heh, thanks. I'm glad you enjoy my writing.

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Meow.
like this one! nice!
anytime :)

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Life is like a ball of wool, it starts fine is messy in the middle and ends up fine again
Oh wow.
That one's amazing.

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"Life is short; break the rules, forgive quickly, kiss slowly, love truly, laugh uncontrollably and never regret anything that made you smile." - Unknown

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